Good! I love the ocean... Well, I think you write well. It's not quite to my taste (I tend to prefer the wordier poems, but that's just me), but it's good anyways. I do like it. I plan on reading more of your poems, and probably reviewing a few more, too. I loved your first three lines: " Mesmerize me/Oh lovely sea/Overwhelm my senses" Especially that last part.

Much love...TinuvielDork

Hehe, I love the band Vertical Horizon. And this poem kinda reminds me of their song "Underwater".

Not so bad down here, underwater - once you get past the fear, underwater...

Well-written poem. Short, simple, sad.

I really like this, great piece. Beautiful as always. Keep up the good work! V x

absolutely wicked! i just LOVE this poem. dunno why. it's short but brilliant. keep wriitng,

~mez~

Aww, it's cute. :)

Theres so much you could do with such a title and line. what you have is nice i like the format sorta suites the drawn horizon. Don't dismiss this as finished though.

Totally original! =D it kinda musical has a musical beat to it..simple but very nice and smart. simple n short n musical n original - my kinda poem :PGood work!

This has a very musical quality to it. It runs down the page well, and captivates the eyes in a way. Good write.