Morosely maroon. Nice alliteration.

And I like the -under- part and the pre-paked chicken. It made me smile. Good job.I smile once a day, and I spent my smile on your poetry. Be afraid. Be very afraid... ;)

Love the words and how they mush so perfectly together.

-chris

I must say...i really enjoyed this poem. Very emotional...and very well chosen words. Very nice

Wow, its dark, but I like the way its written. I love the title and the last line.

Dark and Powerful, I found it captivating.D.A

omg! this is horrible! well written but... shocking. very shocking. and powerful.

Once again I read your work and smile.