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| bea 2008-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abusehey! i really like this story and i would be totally happy if you would write the second chapter. you know - it's five positive reviews now. |
| Isidris Gry 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseOh I like this! I hope you write at least another chapter. At least tell us what happens when he goes to Ryo's apartment! Please! |
| Uke Mochi 2006-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so terribly cute! I love it... so you must write more. How only two people (three including me) could reveiw is beyond me... *sigh*The only thing i could find that needed to be improved doesn't really need to be improved so much as fixed and its a little type-o... you put a colon insead of a quotation mark.Update please! |
| METTOYA 2006-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseShuichi is so shy and unsure of himself. Too cure for words. Curious to see how this unfolds. Please update real soon! |
| Jayn 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHes so cute! And shy n stuff. ^_^ Please update!! |