Wonderful usage of the (I think...) Shakespearian sonnet style. Delve deep into this and you can actually feel the emotion written in this piece

thnx for the review! i love this poem, xpeically the line 'i dont want to face this unwelcome plight' ~dropsofjewpiter~

This poem was really cool...I think the rhyming was awesome, I found many lines I liked in the poem..

The walls that surround me are closing in,And I can no longer hideBut I will keep running until the end.

Yep yep.. those lines were good..And also I liked the first couple of lines too..Keep it Up! Welcome to fiction press... you shall enjoy it.

Very good. I like your rhymne scheme in this.