very bittersweet.. the water thing and mermaid thing is amazing... i really love it

omigasp. i love the speed at which this picks up, until it's like watching the words tumble downhill at breakneck speed. it's beautiful. wow. i love this & i'm putting you on my alert list. brilliant work, raw & real, & the way it's written in first person it's like it came straight from real life which makes it amazingly poignant & in-your-face. & the imagery at the end was stunning, too.

~kait