Aw. This is a very heartfelt poem. Just beautiful. Thank you for this!

at this rate i'm going to be reading nothing but your work. i'm so happy about it. though i hope you don't get sick of me 'cause i'l probably turn redundant as i work through these poems. so i apologize in advance, if i'm annoying you.

i just love it. love how the idea you wrote of here is so simple yet you never see anyone write about it. & there's innocent but tragedy, over something like braiding - but the depth to that, the symbolism that's there is so powerful. wowwow.

~kait

wow. To me, this seems like a poem with a deeper meaning. it is like a metaphor about life. "pulled away" to live on your own, do it your own way. I really like this poem. Keep it up!