I like these. Like you said, they tell a marvelous story...thanks for reviewing 'Paua Shell.' There's another one of mine that lacks a review that does the same, and I consider it one of my favorites...'Southern Comfort' and 'Post Apocalyptic Rome' are ones I'd be honored if you read and reviewed...Thanks again for coming back! Laters, KD

Beautifully done. Keep up the awesome work, you are very talented.

this reminds me of the time when i wrote my first haiku "blood"... it just finished raining, and i couldn't really make the words sound right. creates a really beautiful picture.