It seems a little sudden in the end for her to mention she has a crush on her best friend and was only trying to avoid the feelings by trying to set him up with Brandi, but the idea was very nice and how he was trying to be secretive and told her by hold her hand. Needs a little work, but it's nice.

wow great update

Wow, great extract! Or is this going to be continiued? Anyway, I loved it! "Let us permit nature to have her way..." great phrase!

Anyway, I'm NAGGING you to update Borrow your Smile FAST because...I'm DYING! LOL, good job!