Hmm.. not as good as the other two but still a very interesting poem... funny thing< I was watching the Sailor mOon episode when Rini was turned bad and this reminded me of her for some strange reason.

Once agin... your poem was very intruiging.

HELLO! OMG I LOVE YOUR POEM!! ITS SO NICE AND PROFESSIONAL OK OK OK!! YOUR SITTING RIGHT NECT TO ME ACTUALLY SO I FIND IT REALLY HILARIOUS. HAHA AND BANANA IS KINDA BLIND NOT TO SEE US. HAWHAW. ANYWAYS ITS REALLY RHYMING AND REALLY GOOD. KEEP IT UP!! WOOHOO! WHEEHEE! I LOVE LEGEND!

Another brilliant piece! ^^ I can't tell if I like this one better than the former poem or not.

The rhymes in this had to be my favourite part. They were obvious and subtle at the same time. Absolutely masterful. I particularly enjoyed the second and final stanzas.

Great job! ^^