That is sad. And it is so beautiful and well-written. Keep up the great work!

~Hazellin

P.S. Thank you for reviewing thank you for reviewing :D !

That's a special kind of relationship. You can't trust evryone with your ideas and expect them not to criticize. I really can relate to this poem. Good job.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

I feel tears coming on(not really), but it was still a very moving poem.

Aw. It's brilliant.-Lucky Jack Silver

Quit reading over my shoulder, Jaime. Loserhead.

-Great poem. I like the rhymes. I remember you telling me about you doing this. Sounds fun! I like your poetry- keep it up!