Did she die? I'm slightly confused about that, but it was a good poem - good ryhme scheme, good progression. Slightly angsty, but what the hey?

Wanted to let you know that the next chapter of my "Splinter in the Mind" is up. ...And that I'm waiting for "Idle Doll" to be updated! That is an awesome story, dude - it's on my favorites list.

I love this so much...I just lost my best friend, who, as we always said, was mine and my husband's soulmate (and we were his, and each other's as well)...this poem is wonderful...bravo