Oh. I don't really like hiaku .. at all, but this is pretty good. I don't like the confines of only three rows of 5-7-5 .. it makes me cry. Again, nice.

all my love,felicia

p.s. Good job with the .. whole thing. I really did like it.

hmm, intersting, has deep meaning behind it

Very good, I like how simple and short it is, but it is kinda complex if you really think about i

Too true, great poem!

R-Vega-X