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| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseVery short, very few words. These words are well-chosen. I always get worried that when people write short poems they'll just throw in crap to get it over with. You've done well here. Very good. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is very visual. Encompasses so much in the haiku format. Good work. |
| Sun Rose Fox 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abusegah! |
| Jason Daniels 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abusenice, like your usage of the diringible i would never have thought of it well done |