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Chemically Induced 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
this poem has so many levels to it, as yours usually do. your opening lines were quesy and provocative with description. i almost shuddered when i read them, at the same time i felt the admiration in the words. i loved the part about silver bells on the shoes, i don't know why; i guess it was unexpected prettiness in this dissectual(spelling quesiontable & a madeup word) unique poem. sickening, and wonderful. ;) thats what im talking about.

love, c.induced.
Smoky Bear 2006-03-20 . chapter 1
tangible and succulent. juicy.
Politically Incorrect Lamb 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Stan would love this poem I'm sure. You should show it to him!Hee..I love psychology, so naturally I love this poem (reason 1) and well...you wrote it, and I really havent read anything bad from you tet (reason 2).

Almost called my company Synaptic Design lol..
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