eloquently done, its beautiful!

I love the way you wrote this. The wording is very distinct, powerful, and striking. It hit me in a harsh manner, but still felt gentle, almost patient, and loving. You have again wrung my heart with your poetry. This is beautiful.

This may be one of your poems that has struck me the deepest, like cupid's arrow is a bolt form a ballista. I will try to have a poem to post in response soon, but I love your delivery, again using the technique that enhances each word with overwhelming simplicity and force. Great job, Nyght

wow wow wow. i don't think any words can sum up this poem. wonderful job!

Yet another stunning poem. I love your work. It all seems so meaningful. The images it creates in my mind are almost haunting.