WOW...this is amazing and OMG beautiful, i love the rhyme and the flow this is simply excellent!

Again, your words are powerful. You have a way with words, twisting something normal people see as good to evil, bending something normal people would see as evil to good. It is truly 'A delicate balance, A brilliant dance'. You did a wonderful job with this poem and I can relate to some degree, but only a little as, at present, I'm alone.

I'm already six minutes late for class so this will be brief. It is fantastically energetic and passionate, as are the emotions, and captures just how I feel when with you. Like I said, short.

Wow! This poem may be angsty as the description says, but it is beautiful in a haunting way. I especially love the first verse. It reminds me a little bit of Romeo and Juliet. However, I also love the second verse too.