I love your writing. I haven't been on the net for awhile...so I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile.

Very Very Deep! Great Job!

Thanks so much for your review too!LLC ;)

very powerful and creepy.. nice job

I love the dark imagery here. The way you are willing to write morbid poetry that many other authors are probably scared to write gets my attention. I love reading dark poetry. Keep writing.

Interesting poem, I rather liked the first stanza, it's very foreboding or however you spell that (having an off-day).

Thanks for the review, I love constructive remarks and such. The character Kyoshi is meant to be a bit of a mystery at the start, things will begin to clarify at some point (so I hope).

Peace, -Heather

Wow. Very dark imagery, but well written as well. I expecially liked the end of it.

wow... just, wow... its so hauntingly beautiful. 'and your love it no more' i loved that line. I loved the whole thing. Nice work!