Strong, relatable and realistic. I usually frown upon "babe", but in this one, it has a nice ring to it... sarcastic, cynical: the tastes I like so well. Great job!

-Anna

That's a great poem; I love how it comes off so strong, in-your-face. Now, it sounds to me like it should maybe be a song... ? If it is a song then it's great, but if it's a poem I would mess with the usage of the word "babe." Usually if you're going to repeat a word throughout a poem it works best with some kind of system to it. But anyway you slice it, this poem really rocks - and I love how you ended with a two words line. Simple, yet bold ;P Keep it up.

the first line caught me, and i was hooked to the end. great piece, flows well. but the use of words like 'babe' and 'baby' are used too much. other than that, gd work!