you should write more. this is an unusual idea. unique. looking forward to seeing updates.

Much love,

Aero

DANG THIS GIRL IS COMPLEX!!nice.

Yayy, awesome chappie, I really look forward to reading the later on chapters, =DD It's really really REALLY good so far, so continue updating! Oh yes, and I think I see something really interesting that is goig to happen here... >=DD

OH yeah, continue alright, I'm glad there's a third chapter, I found out that Jakyob is a guy!! =DD yay, I'm so stupid. =.=...

Wow.. this is crazy. Interesting though.

Update soon.

Damn...(Carina:*red eyed glare of dOOm*) Eheh...Yersh...She's scary. And so is her whats-it--training. Yes, very scary. Jaykob sounded a little more boyish this time around. See ya next chapter!

WONDERFUL! SOO EXCITING AND COMPLICATED! and wow u sure have ideas.. !

ehh..i pick A.

Interesting-ish plot, the female chara (Carina, right?) sounds...weird? disturbed?...creepy? But then again, I kinda have a thing against people-ruled-by-schedules, plus I'm going by what Jaykob is thinking of her. Plus I don't read much romance related, so...

Jaykob seems like, well, someone not interested in...relationships with females. Does that mean that the chara is a girl? Or (to put it delicately) a guy not interested in girls? Either way, interesting plot. I'm going to keep an eye on this, k?

W00T! WONDERFUL STORY! CONTINUE CONTINUE! and to say... simpliy creative!

goob job so far now start updating!

hmm...nice.

Oh, I have a question though, is Jaykob and guy or a girl? I don't really know, but it seems REALLY interesting, basically it sounds like a girl... but o.o, name sounds like a guy... please update soon! I feel this story will be very popular soon just like Forgotten Smiles, =DD

GREAT BEGINNING HILARY! u smart A55 (note those are 5's) lol well keep writing and ya... thats all im gonna say...