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| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2006-04-20 ch 3,  | abuseyou should write more. this is an unusual idea. unique. looking forward to seeing updates. Much love, Aero |
| your personal vendetta 2006-02-17 ch 3, | abuseDANG THIS GIRL IS COMPLEX!!nice. |
| unrequitedx 2006-02-16 ch 3, | abuseYayy, awesome chappie, I really look forward to reading the later on chapters, =DD It's really really REALLY good so far, so continue updating! Oh yes, and I think I see something really interesting that is goig to happen here... >=DD |
| unrequitedx 2006-02-16 ch 2, | abuseOH yeah, continue alright, I'm glad there's a third chapter, I found out that Jakyob is a guy!! =DD yay, I'm so stupid. =.=... |
| DOORphrame 2006-02-16 ch 3, | abuseWow.. this is crazy. Interesting though. Update soon. |
| Novacula Amor 2006-02-16 ch 3, | abuseDamn...(Carina:*red eyed glare of dOOm*) Eheh...Yersh...She's scary. And so is her whats-it--training. Yes, very scary. Jaykob sounded a little more boyish this time around. See ya next chapter! |
| thepersonthatlovestrumpets 2006-02-16 ch 3, | abuseWONDERFUL! SOO EXCITING AND COMPLICATED! and wow u sure have ideas.. ! |
| your personal vendetta 2006-02-09 ch 2, | abuseehh..i pick A. |
| Novacula Amor 2006-02-06 ch 2, | abuseInteresting-ish plot, the female chara (Carina, right?) sounds...weird? disturbed?...creepy? But then again, I kinda have a thing against people-ruled-by-schedules, plus I'm going by what Jaykob is thinking of her. Plus I don't read much romance related, so... Jaykob seems like, well, someone not interested in...relationships with females. Does that mean that the chara is a girl? Or (to put it delicately) a guy not interested in girls? Either way, interesting plot. I'm going to keep an eye on this, k? |
| thepersonthatlovestrumpets 2006-02-06 ch 2, | abuseW00T! WONDERFUL STORY! CONTINUE CONTINUE! and to say... simpliy creative! |
| rach 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegoob job so far now start updating! |
| your personal vendetta 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abusehmm...nice. |
| unrequitedx 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, I have a question though, is Jaykob and guy or a girl? I don't really know, but it seems REALLY interesting, basically it sounds like a girl... but o.o, name sounds like a guy... please update soon! I feel this story will be very popular soon just like Forgotten Smiles, =DD |
| thepersonthatlovestrumpets 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseGREAT BEGINNING HILARY! u smart A55 (note those are 5's) lol well keep writing and ya... thats all im gonna say... |