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In State of Agony
2006-02-03
ch 1,
abusei like this topic, i like how you made a dialog with god, great...i like that u reed and make a critic not a review about one of mine "Forgive Us"...is the same topic thats why i'm asking u...

good work
rubberduckylove
2006-01-31
ch 1,
abuseYess, the one about the legs! God poem! But, you already knew that... Love ya!
Strangerwithnoface
2006-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI liked the idea, and the creativity. It was nice. The flow was good, although those damned lines seperating the stanza's were realyl annoying, just as they always are. It kind of takes away from the poem when they're just THERE, but it's okay... (not really) Nice idea though, really.
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