Reviews for Out In the Cold Again

rubberduckylove 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseYay! I like this!! Omg, you have to post the one about the legs. Lol! Yea, um... let's see... I like the picture this paints... good job!
Ghostwriter Revealed 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseI loved your use of anaphora. And the tone seemed to be a bit pleading but it was good. Keep writing...
Strangerwithnoface 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseHm, that was kind of nice. I liked the emotion, although, there didnt seem to be much, it was mostly repitition and thats okay... Besides, they were lyrics, right? I liked the idea.