i love. that's all i can say.

keep writing... i think you're wonderfull

This is a beautiful little piece of writing. So vivid. Great work! xx

Excellent. I really like your descriptions of things- "the notes tickled into the air, exploded like dropped crystalware..."The last line is especially effective- "He stood up and the room breathed again." You've made this seem altogether real to me. Good job!

Monday

*cough*

You stopped my breathing there for a moment, but in a positive fashion.