|Reviews for The Piano Player|
| saccharine lust aerial 3/2/06 . chapter 1
i love. that's all i can say.
keep writing... i think you're wonderfull
| Sundown 1/31/06 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful little piece of writing. So vivid. Great work! xx
| Lost In Context 1/31/06 . chapter 1
Excellent. I really like your descriptions of things- "the notes tickled into the air, exploded like dropped crystalware..."The last line is especially effective- "He stood up and the room breathed again." You've made this seem altogether real to me. Good job!
| Hale Magefire 1/31/06 . chapter 1
You stopped my breathing there for a moment, but in a positive fashion.