This is a magicaly insanely imagiative work of literature you have created. It has been set wonderfuly in a first person view that grips the apropo of the teenage mind set, when faced with the challenges of everyday life and "super natural" anomalies that can effect the mind. The use of comidic effect was a nice touch along with the informative and truthful intro and ending helping it multitudes in my book. This is truely a magical piece and I recommend this piece to any teenager who is looking for a good read. Finally I advise strongly, to keep writing, would you kindly.

- Kackex

Personally, I don't believe in sanity. Or the concept of normal. Both are myths thought up by people who can't handle the true face of the world: pure screaming chaos. So they hide behind their illusions of stability... I accept and embrace it and, as a result, am effectively an outcast from society. Not that I mind. I kind of enjoy being an outcast, I get to freak people out! Playing with people's minds is one of my favorite means of entertainment. ^-^ It's fun! Then, of course, there is the fact that I have multiple personalities.

Dark: Wondered when you were going to get around to mentioning me...

So I guess you could call me...mentally unstable. Eh, like I care. It just makes life that much more interesting.

wow. this is REALLY good. I love how u tie in humaan nature with this b/c its something that ive been preching about for ages. I cant wait to read more, plz update soon. -Salem

wow, reminds me errily of my brother...but the sad thing is he's older than me.

ah...i like this. very fun, now i must read the rest.

slainte!

This was really good. My friend told me to read this story because she absolutely adores it. I see why just in this one alone. I'm about half way through the other story, I just decided to leave a review on this one.

I love your characters. They are humorous and they are well presented. I'm very glad my friend suggested this story. I find it rather amusing.

Keep up the good work. I can tell by Magically Immature that people really enjoy it.

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An excellent story indeed. I can see now how the beginning effects the whole story. I did enjoy this, and I'm glad I was able to read it!

Is that voice her grandfather? Sorry, a small prediction. Well, one more chapter left, and I'm sure it will be just as great as this story is!

This chapter also was very well written, and I love this story!

Again, another good chapter. I had to reread the future me statement, but other than that, the story's flow is going really well!

I can't wait to read more of this! I liked the easter bunny and the retarded fish comments!

When you said it was 'along way' you should've said 'a long', but other than that, I didn't notice anything else. I understand how Katrina feels about the whole school thing, though. Great job!

I liked how you did this, and the reactions of people around her work with it. Forgot this in the last chapter, but I like the necklace!

So, I see she's starting to realize what's going on. Excellent job.

Good chapter. Did you mean 'maturity' instead of 'mature'? Also, before I forget again, the video you made is cool.