oh. i actually felt the tears coming. this truly is magnificent. i know that many people preach this story. they come full on, while you come verry suttle.

this is amazing.

words are power,

liz

Wow. This really made me think. Good work.

Wow, Deep. No one should end up like that.

Sincerely,

Emma Noble

Wow. Very meaningful and impactful message.

You're such a great writer! This poem says alot. And it is, unfortunately, true.

Wow... Dark but scarely true. Definately something I can relate too

nice ending. hs is horrible, i think most people would say. heh.

kait

I didn't