Aw, I remember this one. It has an awesome title. Autumn's Nightmare sounds like it could be a band name.

I think the stand out line from this one would be:

And the lightening remindsThe mothers of the criticismThat can hurt pretty, littleImaginations.

hello dear. i am not sure you remember me..but you were the one who brought me into Andrew's world, starting from soco and then for me to later on discover on my own, jack's mannequin. Thinking about Andrew reminding me of you, and i went in the search for your amazingly brilliant story..which isn't here anymore..would it be rude of me to ask where it went? and why? you were brilliant. and you are brilliant even in this poem. its interesting to say the least "the mothers of criticism that can hurt pretty, little imaginations" i think that lines gets to me the most. well...i shall go check out your other poems...

Another intresting emotion filled poem. I know i keep saying this, but you're a wonderful poet, and a wonderful writer too!