HEy HEY! long time no talk, huh??I thoguiht you weren't using this anymore, and i was kinda sad about that, b/c you are definitely a good writer- but it appears you are back, if only for your poetry...This is... WOW! I really like it, i like the way that it comes across as memories strung together, or like unfinished thoughts - actually it reminds me of me when I am so excited that I keep skipping from on thing to the next- but the way you wrote this is really beautiful. keep in touch hun!

I think I love this one the most. The parenthesis, the words and the use, are astounding. Especially the (You are the rhythm of my). It's just really beautiful. You continously amaze me in everything you try.

Very intrigued by this one. I love the imagery you present! Another great job!