awsome poem

and i wanted to say ur awsome i saw your review for is god? and i share your view and stuff and you don't how much i apprieciated that not all christians beliefs are the same we're all different and stuff that's not the only thing that i thought was awsome but one of the mains...everyone lables me punk/goth grl anyways sry to bother you but i just wanted to say that.

i wish u luck on your writing!

Great stuff. The words all seem to be different schemes but go together so very beautifully. Great job.

this kinda creeps me out a bit...but i like it...very nicely done...still gave me goosebumps and made me look over my shoulder

I like this alot. Imagery is very good. even if you say it's not as good. I like it. The rhyme seems alittle forced sometimes, but nevertheless...well written