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| Left On The Shelf 2006-06-17 ch 1,  | abusePowerful message behind this, and beautiful word choice. |
| cygnus olor 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abusei have pictured a mannequin-like ballerina from this one. good imagery. best of all, a realistic truth unveiled. keep on writing and thanks for the review. * ner * |
| diretto vertigo 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abusevery pretty poem, great job. i love the last line as well. |
| bread and circuses 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The title and the poem and the imagery... It's so GOOD. I love the painting the eyes gold and cheeks red, it gives such a nice doll-like image. Great work! |
| Kartoffel on Canvas 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusei love love love this! its a great example of a basic thought turned complex and beautiful. its tragic, and the emotion is powerful. great work! |
| classic violet 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseOmg... so beautiful & yet so sad. Loved it. |
| citrus scented 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusewow..this is dizzingly fantastic. the ending really stings with realisation. brilliant piece. |
| sunshine 2006-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. |
| Smoky Bear 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusemarvellous poem, very vivid, seems real and honest. |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseoh my...you totally blew me away with this piece...absolutely awesome...i just think you should've elaborated more on how the character realized he didn't love her...but this is very good you know...and you reviewed me...thanks a lot... truly yours... |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseDreamy and tragic. I can see her spinning aroundaroundaround on the dance floor and I can see the look in her eyes upon the realization she isn't loved for who she is. Great piece. |
| chaos called creation 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseOh my. Got to love that ending, it's a sad reality that we all seek for perfection. Trying to make others beautiful to remain in our bubble wrapped snow globe unmarked by flaws. Good work |
| Raspberry Twirl 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abusethis is magical! i love the title, and all the lines paint a bigger picture in my mind! every word is somehow beautiful, pretty, but sad and delicate too. thanks for the review on Dancing Lavender! |
| Plinky 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, lovely. Beautiful imagery and lovely emotion. Great idea. Lovely! Keep writing! |
| in theory 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseVery well done, I've been in this situation myself. Excellent, keep writing! |