Powerful message behind this, and beautiful word choice.

i have pictured a mannequin-like ballerina from this one. good imagery. best of all, a realistic truth unveiled.

keep on writing and thanks for the review.

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very pretty poem, great job. i love the last line as well.

I love it! The title and the poem and the imagery... It's so GOOD. I love the painting the eyes gold and cheeks red, it gives such a nice doll-like image. Great work!

i love love love this! its a great example of a basic thought turned complex and beautiful. its tragic, and the emotion is powerful. great work!

Omg... so beautiful & yet so sad. Loved it.

wow..this is dizzingly fantastic. the ending really stings with realisation. brilliant piece.

nice.

marvellous poem, very vivid, seems real and honest.

oh my...you totally blew me away with this piece...absolutely awesome...i just think you should've elaborated more on how the character realized he didn't love her...but this is very good you know...and you reviewed me...thanks a lot...

truly yours...

Dreamy and tragic. I can see her spinning aroundaroundaround on the dance floor and I can see the look in her eyes upon the realization she isn't loved for who she is. Great piece.

Oh my. Got to love that ending, it's a sad reality that we all seek for perfection. Trying to make others beautiful to remain in our bubble wrapped snow globe unmarked by flaws. Good work

this is magical! i love the title, and all the lines paint a bigger picture in my mind! every word is somehow beautiful, pretty, but sad and delicate too.

thanks for the review on Dancing Lavender!

Wow, lovely. Beautiful imagery and lovely emotion. Great idea.

Lovely! Keep writing!

Very well done, I've been in this situation myself. Excellent, keep writing!