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| Shasta Valentine 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseagain, a wonderfully striking poem. the only part i didn't like was the dancing bear part, it felt extremely disconnected and sort of threw me off. but great job, your feelings come across nicely. --sv |
| The-Dreams-of-Emma-Michele 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abusehmm... very mysterious and eye catching, i had to read it twice! Very nicely done! |
| psychedelia.melancholy 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abusei can smell the sweet scent! and create the vision that you have intended.. |
| art by sola 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. A favourite. "we pick them light" stood out for me, for some reason. But on the whole it was original, small, and happy. I do like it. Thank you kindly for your review. |
| G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K. 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abusewow just wow |
| thealternativechild 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusevery nice, and extremely unique. i like! |
| criti-sized 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, I don't think I've ever sen anybody get so manyu reviews for their poems as you do, that's amazing. Anyways this was very nice and I liked it alot. |
| A Midsummer Nights Sacrific... 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosd I love your poetry so amazing! I also love the word strife but that's off subject love it, love it, love it more you're amazing! ~Moi~ |
| kelsi bones 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abusevery nice, but i have a thing against rhyming in poetry :P Katrina PS: Pin-ups are basically pictures of half (or completely) naked women. They were every popular in the 50's I believe... |
| x.Insanely Serene.x 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's really cool... deep, strong, it meant a lot! I'm not sure if I know all of what, but it was cool! Loved it, Love ya,~*Serenity*~ |
| emergency goose situation 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm... very interesting. Not sure I totally get it, but I really like it. It has an awesome flow and some of the lines are just amazing- "Yes, we dream of many things, With lilacs and lilies fresh" and "Chocolate-dipped strawberries kiss the lips" especially. The first one is just beautiful. Awesome work, keep it up! |
| empathic life 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseYou're a very strong writer, though I'm sure already knew that. I take your reviews as very high compliments, considering how amazing your works are. I like the imagery in this one, and the irony, and contradictions, and. . . well, everything about it, really. Thanks again for the reviews. -E.L. |
| Kesslyn Rosewood 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great. The last stanza is my favorite :) |
| Juni 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Strikes me as very paradoxical- I like paradox. Vivid.Well-done. |
| Zaphod Beeblebrox 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is so strange, and yet, inticing. I love it! Anyway, thanks for reviewing my stuff. I have another poem up today, (or tonight, depends on your timezone. ^_^) Perhaps you'd like it. I've been meaning to return the favor, but I got busy. So, here I am, better late then never. Cheers! |