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Shasta Valentine
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseagain, a wonderfully striking poem.
the only part i didn't like was the dancing bear part, it felt extremely disconnected and sort of threw me off.
but great job, your feelings come across nicely.



--sv
The-Dreams-of-Emma-Michele
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abusehmm... very mysterious and eye catching, i had to read it twice! Very nicely done!
psychedelia.melancholy
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abusei can smell the sweet scent! and create the vision that you have intended..
art by sola
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. A favourite. "we pick them light" stood out for me, for some reason. But on the whole it was original, small, and happy. I do like it.

Thank you kindly for your review.
G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K.
2006-07-22
ch 1,
abusewow just wow
thealternativechild
2006-06-19
ch 1,
abusevery nice, and extremely unique. i like!
criti-sized
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, I don't think I've ever sen anybody get so manyu reviews for their poems as you do, that's amazing.

Anyways this was very nice and I liked it alot.
A Midsummer Nights Sacrific...
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosd I love your poetry so amazing! I also love the word strife but that's off subject love it, love it, love it more you're amazing!

~Moi~
kelsi bones
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abusevery nice, but i have a thing against rhyming in poetry :P

Katrina

PS: Pin-ups are basically pictures of half (or completely) naked women. They were every popular in the 50's I believe...
x.Insanely Serene.x
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's really cool... deep, strong, it meant a lot! I'm not sure if I know all of what, but it was cool! Loved it,

Love ya,~*Serenity*~
emergency goose situation
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseHmm... very interesting. Not sure I totally get it, but I really like it. It has an awesome flow and some of the lines are just amazing- "Yes, we dream of many things, With lilacs and lilies fresh" and "Chocolate-dipped strawberries kiss the lips" especially. The first one is just beautiful. Awesome work, keep it up!
empathic life
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseYou're a very strong writer, though I'm sure already knew that. I take your reviews as very high compliments, considering how amazing your works are. I like the imagery in this one, and the irony, and contradictions, and. . . well, everything about it, really. Thanks again for the reviews. -E.L.
Kesslyn Rosewood
2006-03-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is really great. The last stanza is my favorite :)
Juni
2006-03-17
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! Strikes me as very paradoxical- I like paradox. Vivid.Well-done.
Zaphod Beeblebrox
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is so strange, and yet, inticing. I love it!

Anyway, thanks for reviewing my stuff. I have another poem up today, (or tonight, depends on your timezone. ^_^) Perhaps you'd like it.

I've been meaning to return the favor, but I got busy. So, here I am, better late then never.

Cheers!
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