Wow. Great piece. Well written, thought provoking, a touching insight. Wonderful job. I love it.

Heh. This seems like it could be the story of my ex. She hated her Adam's apple and wondered how she'd pass with it. Scarves would make a very good solution for her, huh? Although unlike your protagonist, she's skinny and has a curvy body for someone born male.

Though everyone else was wondering, apparently... I assumed the speaker was male. From reading your other works and such. My apologies if that seems insulting. And pardon me for not leaving feedback--but I think it would get old. Me always telling you how much I loved the story and how well I think you write and how I admire that about you, as an author of course, simply for not knowing you personally. Anyway

As far as this particular story... well written, as expected. It was thought provoking indeed and, to be honest, I can relate, in some ways--though inversely. The title didn't tie in until the end, but that was effective, I think. I enjoyed it. Very well done.

Awesome story. I was picturing a big girl most of the time although the part about the mens section kept me wondering. Nicely done. -*AA2790

::hugs you:: that was great. i really enjoyed reading it ^_^

Loved the twist at the end. I had no clue he was actually a boy until the very last paragraph. This was really well written, and I found it easy to sympathize with the character. Nice work! :D

Very well written indeed - I did pick up that it was perhaps not as first presented fairly early, but it was still an excellent ending. Sensitively written with touching observations, and very moving indeed. Well done...

One heck of an awesome story. Great job with keeping the gender hidden until the end...really shoves into the light just how quick we are to assume certain things about people when we aren't given the whole truth. It holds a strange moral lesson, while not overwhelming anyone with seriousness. Fantastic.

This was a very moving and incredible story. I really loved it and i know of quite a few people who should read this. Very nice work by the way. Keep it up.

That was really fun. I thought like others that the characters was just a bigger girl, and was pleasently suprised in the end. I also felt I could relate with the characters woes. Good job.

Wow, this was very good. Loved the surprise at the end. At first I just thought it was an overweight girl or something...

Wow, that is truly a well written story, with a well timed suprise at the end. I, as many others seem to have, thought that it was simply a large female, but in the end I discovered the truth. Really good job not letting too much slip of the narrator's gender.

Wow...definately a shock at the end...but very good nontheless, it made me want to keep reading more and more.

Wow, this was really good. At first when I was reading I thought that it was just a really big girl, but...then later I sort of figured it out. Very well-written, and -yeah. But I honestly think that this is one of the best stories I've read on here.

This is, with no doubt, the best short story I've ever read on this site. Please do consider going further.

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