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| Isis of Egypt 2006-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseIt's overused and almost cliché, but I'm still going to use the goddamn expression - raw emotion. Because, really, that's what this poem seems to be all about (to me). Fantastic. It's impressive that you are able to convert emotion to words this easily. It's perfect. "Cracked but never brokenWith words never spokenI cease to tell you how I feelFor I know this pain is oh so real" It's a bit too close to home. But I'll get over it. Anything for art. And after all, it is perfection. I do applaud you. Encore! |
| HauntedMisery 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful and amazing, excellent work! |