Wow. Huge body of work and a very creative idea.

Great haikus! :D

~Anna~ ^_^

I thought the first two lines had a nice contrast, in an interpretation; "heart's sincerity," but then the next line says "two red lips," which implies lipstick use and therefore more along the lines of "lust."

I liked this because the diction was really charming here.

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I liked the first stanza because of the way you made the last line, "Your kiss,- cool melon" stronger by first setting the time of the year as summer.

[A moment's longing,—
Like clouds brushing summer sun,—]
I like these lines. Original and nice imagery.

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I think it's pretty awesome you can write poems inspired from others' works.

I liked this because it painted a pretty picture; like the last line, but I also liked the "nightingale sings" line as well.

[soft soothes beast's red heart.]
I like this line because of the way one could interpret the heart, something metaphorical, to be soothed, something physical.

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I liked this because I felt you were able to capture multiple feelings throughout it.

I liked the last line; lovely diction and imagery.

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I really like your word choices and descriptions here. It was so pretty.

Oh wow...I like your response my poem. While mine sounded more inspirational than spiritual, yours sounded so spiritual and at the same time, surreal.

The imagery of the first stanza is so pretty. The two stanza complement each other by being almost opposite. The first one is dreamy and concrete while the second is wondering and sounds "evolutionary", in a way?

This is actually very good. I feel so honored (because of the response). Keep it up!

-C.N.

I really like those questions you ask in the second stanza, they are really great. Your descriptions are nice as well.

Sweet stuff.

Really true piece. It makes a great point. I like the comparison in the last stanza.

interesting descriptions. Lotsa fancy words... lol.

"Them & Us" is a BRILLIANT piece. You truly captured the sense that everything we have become, and not just us...but the planet and all of life as well, couldn't have been made by chance...everything is too 'perfect', yet perfectly 'imperfect'. Wonderful job, and I feel the exact same way~!

very pretty

Pretty colors