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| simpleplan13 2008-02-27 ch 64,  | abusevery pretty |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 39, | abusePretty colors |
| Haberdasher 2007-07-23 ch 8, | abusedelicious. i need to get back into some sort of writing circle. and this reminds me why. i miss words flowing as yours do. |
| teh tarik 2007-06-12 ch 45, | abusesuch pretty words.i love the metronome image, and how the poem flows as though it were keeping tune to a musical pulse. |
| teh tarik 2007-06-12 ch 47, | abusei love how you address her as WOMAN. it's so lovely. |
| Sambot 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-25 ch 37, | abusevery pretty... i hate srping.. lol |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 43, | abuseI love the sense of assurance, future, permanence in the end. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 44, | abuseVery rhythmic |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 42, | abuseYay "syzygy" - I was waiting to see that word again! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 41, | abuseAh the diction in this is quite interesting, lends a different flavor. Gives your poetry "shape" so to speak, asymmetric... Cool. :) |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-16 ch 36, | abuseI really love that last stanza |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-16 ch 35, | abuseI like the secnd to last stanza a lot. |
| Dragonlady626 2007-04-04 ch 2, | abuseOh wow, and thank you for unwittingly clearing something up I was worrying about, when I finally am able to post something on here, I know I can still put it here and what to call it. Thanks! |
| recycle rhymes 2007-04-01 ch 16, | abuseshe is really inspirational isn't she? anyway...i love the imagery in here. very summery. can't wait for it to come. and haha wouldn't it be funny to respond to a response? |