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simpleplan13
2008-02-27
ch 64,
abusevery pretty
simpleplan13
2007-08-22
ch 39,
abusePretty colors
Haberdasher
2007-07-23
ch 8,
abusedelicious.


i need to get back into some sort of writing circle. and this reminds me why.
i miss words flowing as yours do.
teh tarik
2007-06-12
ch 45,
abusesuch pretty words.i love the metronome image, and how the poem flows as though it were keeping tune to a musical pulse.
teh tarik
2007-06-12
ch 47,
abusei love how you address her as WOMAN. it's so lovely.
Sambot
2007-05-26
ch 1,
abuseVery nice.
simpleplan13
2007-05-25
ch 37,
abusevery pretty... i hate srping.. lol
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 43,
abuseI love the sense of assurance, future, permanence in the end.
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 44,
abuseVery rhythmic
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-15
ch 42,
abuseYay "syzygy" - I was waiting to see that word again!
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-15
ch 41,
abuseAh the diction in this is quite interesting, lends a different flavor. Gives your poetry "shape" so to speak, asymmetric... Cool. :)
simpleplan13
2007-04-16
ch 36,
abuseI really love that last stanza
simpleplan13
2007-04-16
ch 35,
abuseI like the secnd to last stanza a lot.
Dragonlady626
2007-04-04
ch 2,
abuseOh wow, and thank you for unwittingly clearing something up I was worrying about, when I finally am able to post something on here, I know I can still put it here and what to call it. Thanks!
recycle rhymes
2007-04-01
ch 16,
abuseshe is really inspirational isn't she? anyway...i love the imagery in here. very summery. can't wait for it to come. and haha wouldn't it be funny to respond to a response?
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