Aww that's so sad! It's beautifully written. I only saw two typos: "She HAT to wait until the rain and sand dulled the edges." and, "She wore a fake smile PLATERED on her face,..." Yeah that's it.

You made me cry, meanie.

Seriously, though, this is a gorgeous piece. I mean, the words and the imagery. *love* Absolutely beautiful and just so, so emotional.

Nice diction. Nicely writen.

:(

I was on the just-in page and saw this and freaked out. Today in History class someone said something that reminded me of you and I freaked out.

This depressed me. I was already in a poo-like mood and you made me cry just a little. Sigh. It made me feel all deja vu like because my friend is going all crazy depressed right now.

Are you feeling the way this is? If you are... :( I want you to be happy. And if not then I hope you never feel this way.

Love xoxo