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| Chicanery A. Beguile 2006-02-02 ch 1, | abuseAww that's so sad! It's beautifully written. I only saw two typos: "She HAT to wait until the rain and sand dulled the edges." and, "She wore a fake smile PLATERED on her face,..." Yeah that's it. |
| Chainlinks 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseYou made me cry, meanie. Seriously, though, this is a gorgeous piece. I mean, the words and the imagery. *love* Absolutely beautiful and just so, so emotional. |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseNice diction. Nicely writen. |
| SerialXLain 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuse:( I was on the just-in page and saw this and freaked out. Today in History class someone said something that reminded me of you and I freaked out. This depressed me. I was already in a poo-like mood and you made me cry just a little. Sigh. It made me feel all deja vu like because my friend is going all crazy depressed right now. Are you feeling the way this is? If you are... :( I want you to be happy. And if not then I hope you never feel this way. Love xoxo |