A sad and hopeless story. But the kind that draws you in and makes you think. To wonder what it could be like. Well written to the point of almost being scary.

I think that you use to much detail not enough is going on, or well it is, but it's disguised by the image of this eroding facility of rejected beings. either way I like the Lanely guy! And that dirty one who masturbates alot...that's cute, LOL! Um...thank you for your earlier review... have we spoken before? If we did...then it doesn't matter now cus I'm ytrapped up in massachusettes with a computer that blocks everything but fiction press (practically) but at least ive got this! contact me.Coon

Raw. Lovely. I couldn't find you. When did you change your penname?

Eh.

-pictographic.love

very good, really. a bit confusing, but i liked it. it had a nice touch of darkness and despair that wasnt overdone. its not everyone who can do that, you know.

I liked that there were scant descriptions of the characters, but in depth descriptions of the trips and surroundings. Stellar writing, really. Your stories get progressively better and more interesting. New favorite.