Wow. That was wonderful. Oddly enough, it reminds me of me and my best friend/ex-boyfried/kinda current boyfriend. We fight and then we lapse into adoring each other and then go back to fighting, but we're always there for each other. I positively LOVED IT. You're a great author, and I hope you continue writing. :) It really was fantastic.

This was such a great story. It really makes me miss the summer :P The whole 'dream' thing was kind of weird at first but as Bridgette realized what she missed out on, I realized that it was a really good decision and that I shouldn't have doubted you. Haha :) Anyways, you did an amazing job :D

Even though this seemed a bit bland, I still liked how you wrote it and the way it seems to be heading. I can't wait to read more :)

i love your story it was totally unexpected! it's not those damned cliches that i really hate. ok so i'm biased it was a bit cliche but at least the ending was a change!

OMG! that story was so good. it seemed so real!:)

anyway, lavv it:)

Wow that was some dream. I really enjoyed reading this story. Great characters.

Hey girl.
Just a couple thoughts on your story so far... Constructive criticism, I hope.
-I know that you're going for all the "B" names in the family and I see some merit in that. But I have to say, I'm getting really confused since the names are so similar. In the scene where Brigitte is talking to her sisters about them looking trampy, I couldn't keep them straight. I realize that they're fairly minor characters, so it doesn't matter all that much, but some distinction might be helpful if you choose to do anything more with this story.
-I don't know, I just don't find it very believable that Brigitte HATES Brendan just because he smokes. I mean, yah, that might make her disgusted and all, but I just don't feel like their little conversation and the fact that he smokes can really cause her to hate him so much that she ignores him in front of people and refuses to acknowledge him. I mean, to act THAT rudely to a mostly stranger...I can't quite see somebody acting like that.
-And finally, at this point your characters aren't very likeable. I know you're going for the hard-nosed, PMSy character in Brigitte, but it wouldn't hurt to show a little more of her humane side. As of now, we've just seen her being angry and annoyed and witchy. That's not going to endear readers to her plight.
-But I like your start and I look forward to seeing where your story goes! I love Pride and Prejudice and I love how you adapted that favorite quote to modern times. :)
Look forward to reading more!

lol, Brianna, Brooke, Bridget, Braydon. WOW!

D'AW. I HOPED SHE'D HUG BRENDAN. :D

aw. brigette likes him but she doesnt want to. D: that's sad.

wow, that was quite interesting. you did pretty well in making the story your own. i've read P&P many times, so i know it really well, and the whole time reading SBHH i was trying to second guess it. but i had to tell myself to stop and just enjoy your story - it's SO not an exact copy, which is great. i like the changes you made - like Brayden running away with the car instead of with BJ. and that twist at the end - who would've thought!

good job. except for one thing - you never really cleared up the thing about Kate's pregnancy... is she pregnant or not??

so, is kate really pregnant? you left that part out. and before she had the dream, didn't she have a huge fight with brendan? how can she just forget about that? i just think that they should've definitely cleared that up. and what about her relationship with brayden? ugh, so many lose ends. BUT, other than that, great story. absolutely loved it. :))

Well...that was interesting.
At first i was very annoyed when it turned out it was all a dream. It would've been good to actually end it there and then instead of making it a dream but, it turned out great in the end.

It sure was great to read :) I liked it, a lot

Thanks for such a cool story

wow this was a very interesting read :D definitely a different take on P&P...great job :)

Amazing! You write so well, and I could feel Brigette's emotions so clearly. Not to mention how funny the entire story was...

I love the P&P theme and you pulled it off very well; you took the concept and made it yours without making it sound forced or plagiarized...so great job there as well!

I don't know what else to add, other than that I'm looking forward to reading more stuff from you!

Keep writing!
- Rebekah