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Olivine
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseHA omg, I love that first line. "It is a truth universally acknowledged..." Such a famous line twisted into something much more modern. It's like you're flying and then there's the rest of the sentece and you're suddenly on the ground, having fallen. Because of the moderness. It's not a bad thing. I'm terrible with explaining myself. But yeah...

I just wanted to say that. And that I've added this to my C2.

Olivine.
Smiling Serenade
2008-05-05
ch 19,
abuseWow. Oh, my goodness. I think that I have to describe this story as brilliant.

Half the story may be a dream, but this has to be one of the best stories I've read.

I love the twist and how "Lucy" shows back up in the end.

Amazing story. The characters are derived slightly from their Austen counterpart, but they are still original and have their own personality and story.

I completely adored this.
deny.me.not
2008-05-04
ch 19,
abuseThis was so cute. I'm glad Brigette decided to grow up and get it overwith. This was such a cute story, thanks so much for sharing.

I look forward to your next story.

-dmn.
DOLCEVITA
2008-05-01
ch 19,
abuseWOW! What a great twist! Never did I expect that the whole thing was a dream! I love it though! Great ending, great story!
Lily Laurence
2008-05-01
ch 19,
abuseReally cute story! *favorites*
Sydney-J 14
2008-05-01
ch 19,
abusei so wasnt expecting it all to be a dream
what a big shocker it was
i loved this story
are you gonna do a sequal cos you got plenty of options for a main character because of the four sisters n theres kate too
I Murder on Impulse
2008-04-30
ch 19,
abuseHahaha cute!
effervescent-sentiments
2008-04-30
ch 3,
abuseFirst impression? Everyone's a **.

Maybe it's the modern influence, but in the actual P&P Mr. Darcy's jerkiness was borne of being shy and incompetent - not actually being a jerk. I don't like the Bridgette character much so far, either - Elizabeth in P&P was kind and witty, not cruel and conceited.

However, I'm glad that these characters are your own, and I can tell I'll like them better as the chapters go on.

I very much like it so far, actually, don't get me wrong. And it's a good idea. But I would try to either stick with the formal lilt of Austen's work, or come up with your own tone. This mix sounds confusing and not fitting at all.

I'm sure I'll like it better as it progresses.
xLittleBlackConverse.
2008-04-27
ch 19,
abuse..i SO did not expect that! That was dirty play. Haha no but i loved this story. Brendan is so hot. And Brigette's charatcer is too awesome to hate. I love girls like that. The whole thing being a dream out me off in the end and but your last chapter made up for it. As long as they get together in the end, its all good. =]
A DreamWriter
2008-04-22
ch 19,
abuseWow, it's over already =[ I so wasn't expecting an ending! Lol.
Aly
2008-04-21
ch 19, anon.
abuseSimply wonderful. I think the having the dream was such a great way to make it your own!
Alenor
2008-04-21
ch 19,
abuseheya, this is a good ending. cya later ~ Alenor.
Aragorn is mine
2008-04-20
ch 19,
abusehey

Congrats on the award, you deserved it, and congrats on finishing the story =D It was original and stuff and it was very sweet, I think you managed to finish it right as in you didn't drag the story so like other authors and it was all good. Maybe you should consider an epilogue? lol Well whatever it was a great story and I can't wait until you finish your other one's.
XwhatevX
2008-04-20
ch 2,
abuseHAH! probably should have read the authors note at the beginning.

hahahah sorry bout that! i like it though
XwhatevX
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abusethe description of the sisters remind me of pride and prejudice

but i dont really mind so far
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