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LancerDragoon 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abuseStarts off very, VERY strong but somehow loses steam towards the end. I'm sorry but I have to be frank like that. I like the story (hell, I PRINTED IT OUT) and I love the characters. Karen was great but I felt that she was slightly ignored... which is a shame since she's got potential to be an awesome character. Maybe a prequel to this about her? It'd be a nice addition. Also, the main character feels slightly stiff. He's got personality but for such a great guitarist, you never see him ACTUALLY PLAY. A scene where he plays alone at home would be really cool. Also, while we're on the subject of guitars, I believe you never mentioned anywhere that Anna played the instrument, and very well too, judging from the final scene at the club. And if she DOES play at the club, then shouldn't Tony and Anna have at least talked at least ONCE? As fellow guitarists? Oh, for some reason, I'm interested in the other band members, Liz and... the other one. Liz, in particular. I don't know why, maybe it's just the name. Despite all this complaining, I still like the story. It's a great short story, good length, good characters. Keep it up!
Drizit 2006-02-10 ch 1,	abuseOh my! That had one sad ending! And it didn't end in blood! And it's almost... khairul-ish! Okay fine i'm doing it again. Anyway, this is a very good stoyr even though it had practically no blood which is very wrong considering you. You should write more short stories like, you know, with these sad endings. Less blood and gore.
Autumnymph 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseBroken.
BJ Worth 2006-02-02 ch 1,	abuseWow, I'm very impressed. The story was good, packed quite an emotional punch for a short story. Characters were interesting. Grammar was impressive. Very enjoyable read.

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