wooah...
that's sad...:-(

Beautiful piece of work. So moving and touching. I just want to hug you so much now - it really was incredible! Brilliant finale - very clever. I hope you (even though you aren't dumb or even mute) or anyone else has never had to go through this, but the cruel world just wouldn't be satisfied if there weren't at least some people who suffer the excruciating pain of rejection. You do know me by the way...very well in fact...though I must confess that I do only harbour platonic feelings for you...perhaps because we are of the same gender and I'm regrettably straight lol. Confrontation with your immense sexiness has had be seriously reconsidering though lol.

I really liked this... It was sad but really good.

Oh my gosh! I love it! So sad =[

Dude... No wonder Swinford gave you full marks for it..

Yeah I didn't read it online, but so? Doesn't mean I can't review it... and it's much better than the first time you wrote it.

I like the description. The A* grade definition was something like 'intricate detail and description.'Definitely got that... ROCK ON!

Sad, but still with a happy glinting ending. I really liked it.

ok that was a little strange. and depressing but well written. ahh well, cya later.

Very touching. It's still sending chills down my spine.

Yeah, you're right. I like this version much better. It kind of seemed sadder and much more emotional because she never was referred to by an actual name. Emphasized her whole sense of isolation.

Eheh. I'll stop mumbling about incoherent things now. In any case, I'm glad you edited it.

-Eveiveneg

I like it. It's really sweet. I can relate to the part about being beaten up. It's a good overall story and nicely told.

*sniff* *sniff* I feel like crying now!