I can't wait to see what you have for us. I really like this story a lot.

Glad that I gave you an idea. And sorry for not reading right away...I've been a little distracted...I can't help it, sorry again

Wonderful chapter,yes it was depressing, but I still liked it. Update soon? Maybe?

~Tzotel

Amazing, amazing story so far. You really need to work on the grammar though. The lack of periods in the appropriate places is really bugging me. Nice plot. Nice imagination. Nice idea.

I'll have to read the rest later, but here's what I can say so far:

The way you show hints of what happened in the past is amazing. I am so curious about what's happened to Juliet concerning Jessica and Eric. The way you describe characters is also very special - I can imagine most of the characters' appearances fairly clearly. I'm also very curious about the way the whole institution system works. it's a very original story plot!

as for suggestions, there were a couple of lengthy paragraphs. i think if you separate a couple, the story will be much easier to follow. anyways, so far so good!

That was so incredibly sad!! Kate is so silly, she shouldn't have jumped. I hope Juliet forgets about Eric soon and falls in love with that guy from the school nearby. Great chapter!

OMG! I was starting towonder what happened to you! This is such a great story! I am SSO glad you updated! OMG!

She didn't mean to do it! It was self-defense! But I can see where she's coming from! Oh, poor Juliet!

Update as soon as possible...I'm waiting!

~Tzotel

aw wow, that one made my eyes water a bit (not going to lie) update soon!

Can't wait to hear more. You're doing great.

Aw man, this chapter was really really sad. My eyes were watering. Poor Alfie.

I love how you're building up the story. This chapter was great.

sorry thought u had finished - are u gonna update any time soon?

Hi! Sorry it took so long fo me to review! I actually started to read the first ahlf of the chapter when I got the email. But then I had to go to work and I didn't get time after...and school is evil...

Anyway, great chapter! I would love to see more about Eric in the future, so we can know about his character. Who is he? Is he actually good for Juliet? I would love to know!

Update soon!

~Tzotel

please don't end the story here

First I want to say that I'm sorry for not reading this sooner!! I've been so busy that it's hard! lol

Sad (ish) chapter! lol but still really good! update soon!

Aw, so sad, but so cute. I hope everything works out for Juliet =)