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| Lady Sakaki 2007-10-08 ch 2,  | abuseCool...cool...I like how you have the other vampire feeding off in the corner, all nonchalant, while Rikki and Lor are talking. It helps set the setting and the mood of the moment. |
| Lady Sakaki 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseNice and fast paced - straight to the plot...I like it ^.^ |