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| ex caelis 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuse"Those cerulean depths had always had a way of making me feel like I was the biggest idiot of the century." - the fact that you wrote those lines in the beginning and in the end gave this piece something i can't quite describe. some sort of affirmation, maybe. :) overall, i actually thought you knew how to play chess! it's the emotion of the character that made it seem that way, i guess. :) |