I love green bananas... lol, sorry, that was pointless.

“Get out of the car, I need to touch you!” Now I would simply DIE if a boy said that to me. Of course, a guy would only say that if he was gay, and since I don't have the "qualities" gay boys look for... oh well, I can dream.

I loved the glaring at his ear part, haha.

“Trev, shut up before I beat you. It’s ok, he followed me here, and no he wasn’t about to rape me or anything.” That's quite amusing, but is it true? I mean, he was just biting his shoulder... (I guess I like Trev 'cause I can relate to him. That's one of my favorite tricks!)

I know exactly what Joey Potter eyes are!! Fantastic line.

Their kisses are yummy. :P

Anyway, update soon, please! If you're okay. Though you did update ages ago (internet issues and school kept me away from the computer) so you're probably past that now, right? I really hope you are. Update as soon as you can. :) I am still reading, and still loving it!

"Her skinny arms were set carelessly atop her legs as if she was a wooden puppet someone had dropped and forgotten to pick up." That is a very good description. So was the line about what silence looked like.

The comment thing amused me, but it is slightly creepy... I'm still not totally sure how I feel about Trevor. I can't help loving him but, geez, what a jerk. It's just... I don't know, after all that, I can't believe I still like him. You have talent, that's for sure! "

"It was a huge shock to hear him being so vocal." Wasn't to me. :P He's the type, lol.

Love the ending! Quite curious to see where this is going. Somewhere good, I'm sure. Keep it up!

Hehe, very nice so far. Trev reminds me of a guy friend of mine who used to send me pics of his piercings (which were in "sensitive" places). I want to read more of this, its interesting so far. Hope to see an update soon.

Trevor is creepy enough that Nate should be running for the hills. :)

*waves* Kinda cute, very funny, and, unsurprisingly, I like this chapter. Sorry Ihaven't been reveiwing (or updating) lately, but life seems to be interfering. :) Damn it.

I hope ur ok.

He stayed all that time sitting out there waiting for him? that is bit freaky.

Yay! It's so good to have an update!Soory about life, it sucks when it gets in the way of more pleseant things. I can only infere what might have happened but I'm sure it wasn't what you wanted to be doing. Hope things are going better!~WK~

I'm glad you finally updated.

Please don't take so long again I really want to know what happens next

Wonderfully written. I have a sick feeling in my stomach, because I can identify so completely with that. Ugh. I dread what's going to happen.

Really good story so far!

Ack!! Update! Update! I'm so into this story, I feel like I've been cut off from an addiction or something!

Nate is so sensitive... it's so cute. And Trevor is a total jerk but I still like him for some reason... I love the part about coloring his hair. "Of course that was when Trevor decided to show himself by climbing up behind me and wrapping his arms possessively around my waist." Ah, that's why I love him. He's dominating, lol. "half hug, half who knows what" Lol, great line. And the kiss... aw, adorable! And the nose kiss! Even more adorable! There's just something about nose kisses... lol. "kissed my nose three times before biting my ear." So damn cute. And I loved the "We Belong Together" part. (How creepy is it that that song came on the radio just as I read that? Wow.) And even weirder... I call one of my very gay best friends puppy, lol! And the goodnight kiss... aw. I love this so much. What a sweet ending. Update really soon, okay? :) (And sorry I'm getting all fan-girlish. Boy love just gets to me.)

very curious to why the whole thing goes sour so please update soon

Nate, ditch Trevor already! He's psychotic. Seriously. *stares dumbfounded* But then, I guess if you like somebody...*shrugs* Oh well.

Am I sensing a line of megadeth, or is that just a coincidence?

I'm getting the awful feeling Nate isn't going to be able to get rid of Trevor. Trevor is just...okay, he's a real loser. The part about 'you can find a better man' made me want to gag. I feel awful for Nate, too, for being unable to tell him to ** off.