| Reviews for I Wish |
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Ryumaru shogunate 8/13/06 . chapter 1That was nice. The wishes of those who have felt affection make me feel fuzzy. To bad it also doesn't affect my exsistence. Please write more poetry. Now for some different thoughts. You live in Scotland? Is it nice? I hope to visit your country someday during my exsistence as a Rurouni. Till then! Ryumaru |
kit feral 2/2/06 . chapter 1I wonder if I know who this is about... either way, it's beautiful. "I wish I knew you, The way my heart says I do." I can relate to that oh so much... I love the way this flows. "I wish you wore your heart on your sleeve, Instead of your scars." Best line by far. Amazing. And I love the last line. This is so awesome, you really should write poetry more often. _ |
Vyvyan 2/2/06 . chapter 1Very nice! I especially love "I wish you wore your heart on your sleeve, instead of your scars." Amazing. |