This was amazing! Your writing style is one of the most beautiful (in my mind). It reads as though it didn't take much thought and yet not a single word could be replaced and nor added. This really appealed to me since the topic of heaven and hell is such an entreating, mysterious one to me.loved the "Ohblessedbe" "Ohtwistedme". In fact, I loved all of it.I've read much of your other work and I'll be sure to come back and review and decide which to put on my favorites list.

keep the power writing going,

Mia

This is...it's just...WOW. You put such nasty twist on thing swhich are meant to be wonderful in only a few words. It' sreally amazing. talent talent talent. Zow...

~mos

Chillingly twisted. I really like it.

wow i loved this. very controversial (sp?). i loved the last line. good job.

i'm seeing a trend. your last one was like this too. or was this first? i'm not sure. i can't remember. but it's nice. really well written. i'm liking it.