"As my feet remain frozen

And my presence ignored"

beautiful poem. just beautiful. i loved it.

I really like this! ^.^ I just kind of faltered over the word "stupid" a few times. Any other words you could have used? Sorry, I'm not one to talk...^^

as i always say and will continue to say your writing is awesome and I'm jealous of it, I wish i could write as well as you! You rock, this poem rocks, wtf isn't my sound working?! ... uhm.. right... see in a few! todles!!