Aw. I think everyone has to write an "I am" poem just to get it out of their system, you know? I think mine might have been "Too Much, Too Fast..." Yeah haha sorry. Off on a tangent. Anyway this is great I love love love the Monty Python line! WHOO. And the imagery was amazing. This is great and I love it. Bravo. Everyone can relate, I think. My favorite lines:
"I am only one person hiding from my secrets." Very powerful. I love that idea that you're the only one who hide from your secrets.
"My cousin as I sat on his knee/ Long before the car crash." So sad. This poem incopporated both the bitter and the sweet in life.
"I am all I think" WOW. Just amazing. I also like the ending. It's a great touch.
This is excellent and I love it. Bravo. I love poems that really give you a look into that little secret side of someone's soul.
My gosh! I did a poem exactly using the same formatting in year 8! Geez, where is that poem! Hehe, adore this poem, excellent work! Well done, and keep writing! ^_^
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