very interesting and you spoke truly when you said about our crimes coming back to haunt us, 'the ropes that swing in tune have bodies stiched in', great description of deaths in the war. Continue writing

I did not know you write poetry! This is really good. A little controversial. But its good anyway.. ('',)

I rather like this. I don't know why. It's blunt, and almost controversial - I like the style as well. Tres cool. Anyways, good job.