the long ellipse detracts more than anything. I realize it's being used as a pause but it just ends of looking kind of silly because its how 11 year olds on aim conversate? Not that bad, but you know, it just brings that image to mind. I think a long dash or something would have set the point more elegantly, but that's just me.

This is a really beautiful poem its unusual and different which makes it unique i really like it :-)

Its just you.

Poetry can be as free and expressive as the author chooses it to be. It qualifies as a poem.

Maybe it's me, but this hardly qualifies as a poem.