Lovely work here Hidden. Your ending is especially memorable. I love a poet who knows how to end their work well. Thanks ever so much for your continued time, support, and thoughtful comments. I can't tell you how much it warms my heart to have friends here on FictionPress. And I hope that I have brought as much light into your life as you have to mine. Thanks again for all your time. *hugs*

Cool idea!

oh wow, this is so sad. love the last two lines- beautiful.

Wow, I just looked at your other poem 'alsof' and sorry, wow, you can speak in dutch? hehe, awesome. I don't know why the interests me so much... whats that dutch poem about by the way? sorry... i get really curious when somethings in a language i can't read. i lived in holland for a while... i never really leant dutch though, anyway, great poem! awesome work.

Greay work...really great work...god i havent looked at ur stuff forever...but to the point, this was awesum..one of ur best id say, neways id better b off...hope 2 hear from u soon..^-^

Beautiful. I loved it.

wow this is very good and very said! it really made think.. about my past.. now.. and my future! your words are so true!!

see ya 2moro poppetje!! *kiss*

beautiful. absolutely. this had so much emotion and imagery, i loved this so much. the title was what captured me into reading it at first, but then i got intrigued by the way you wrote this. i really liked it and i know i can relate.fantastic work.

WOW...that was extremely powerful, well done.

I liked this a lot. Very detailed and flows pretty well. Bravo hun! Bravo *hugz*

Yes, indeed...photos...a reminder of the past...good, good ^.^