Reviews for The Maiden and her lover

DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuse"Still the springtime And you the sun"--I love these lines. They symbolism is beautiful and perfect.
myheartwantsyou 2006-04-12 ch 1,	abusebeautiful
Raspberry Twirl 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abusei love how you repeated the line AND THE SUN. somehow that really caught my attention! This is a wonderful peace, and i hope you continue to write other similar poems! lots of smiles, raspberry twirl
laughing girl 2006-02-03 ch 1, anon.	abusesweet. very pleasant and beautiful.