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Reviews For: The Maiden and her lover

DarkBlysse
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuse"Still the springtime

And you the sun"--I love these lines. They symbolism is beautiful and perfect.
myheartwantsyou
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abusebeautiful
Raspberry Twirl
2006-02-03
ch 1,
abusei love how you repeated the line AND THE SUN. somehow that really caught my attention! This is a wonderful peace, and i hope you continue to write other similar poems!

lots of smiles, raspberry twirl
laughing girl
2006-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abusesweet. very pleasant and beautiful.
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