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Reviews For: The Maiden and her lover
Eternally Ivy's Pen 2009-02-26 . chapter 1
Sweet and simple, and that's why it's awesome :3
DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 . chapter 1
"Still the springtime

And you the sun"--I love these lines. They symbolism is beautiful and perfect.
myheartwantsyou 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
beautiful
Raspberry Twirl 2006-02-03 . chapter 1
i love how you repeated the line AND THE SUN. somehow that really caught my attention! This is a wonderful peace, and i hope you continue to write other similar poems!

lots of smiles, raspberry twirl
laughing girl 2006-02-03 . chapter 1
sweet. very pleasant and beautiful.
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